Warehouse #1 - Bradley Schwartz




Southern Railway Freight Warehouse, now a community market.

Camera:   G1
Lens:   21 Biogon
Film:   Fuji Super HQ 100
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Posted:   21-Jun-2002

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Comments

Good

Really nice one. I like the composition. A little could come off the bottom but, not really necessary. Nice scene. The placement of the underneath of the eve into the upper left corner is perfect. I'd have given it an "8" but, you DIDN"T let us rate it.

MARK MILLEN     21-Jun-2002 at 13:10

Good

composition, perspective and exposure, but the ground area is awfully empty.

Knut Skjærven     21-Jun-2002 at 15:35

Thanks for the suggestions

Yes, there is a lot of empty space, but I would not have wanted any vehicles blocking the view, particularly if they did not complement the vintage architecture. Cropping the bottom would help. - Brad

Bradley Schwartz     21-Jun-2002 at 20:48

repeating

Bradleythis motief of repeating elements is very appealing. Yes, less empty ground would not hurt--nor though does it hinder my appreciation of the scene. The vintage water tower, too is a nice counterbalanc to the smoke stack.

Jerome Belthrop     21-Jun-2002 at 22:52