Warehouse #1 - Bradley Schwartz

Southern Railway Freight Warehouse, now a community market.
| Camera: | G1 |
| Lens: | 21 Biogon |
| Film: | Fuji Super HQ 100 |
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| Posted: | 21-Jun-2002 |
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Comments
Good
Really nice one. I like the composition. A little could come off the bottom but, not really necessary. Nice scene. The placement of the underneath of the eve into the upper left corner is perfect. I'd have given it an "8" but, you DIDN"T let us rate it.
MARK MILLEN 21-Jun-2002 at 13:10Good
composition, perspective and exposure, but the ground area is awfully empty.
Knut Skjærven 21-Jun-2002 at 15:35Thanks for the suggestions
Yes, there is a lot of empty space, but I would not have wanted any vehicles blocking the view, particularly if they did not complement the vintage architecture. Cropping the bottom would help. - Brad
Bradley Schwartz 21-Jun-2002 at 20:48repeating
Bradleythis motief of repeating elements is very appealing. Yes, less empty ground would not hurt--nor though does it hinder my appreciation of the scene. The vintage water tower, too is a nice counterbalanc to the smoke stack.
Jerome Belthrop 21-Jun-2002 at 22:52
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