branches against stucco wall - Robin Kleb




Does this qualify for an ivory entry?

Camera:   G1
Lens:   45mm
Film:   Fuji Sensia 400
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Posted:   26-Apr-2002

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Oooo

This really appeals to me. I like the twisted form and the texture of the branches. The strips in the background I don't care for but; maybe it would change the look too much if they were gone. I'd have cropped off a very small amount on the right so that the branches on both sides end up in the corners.

MARK MILLEN     26-Apr-2002 at 22:12

good idea!

I like the idea of cropping the right side! Is it too late to change it or would that be cheating? Although on the other hand, while I don't like the strips in the background much either, there they were, and I thought maybe it was good to have that repetition of the darker one on the side. I wish it didn't fade out towards the top. I was afraid to try to change it and make it look all phoney though.

Robin Kleb     26-Apr-2002 at 22:29

Robin

I would undtilt the image vertically and crop the RH side. It is not cheating as long as the deadline is not there yet.

Knut Skjærven     27-Apr-2002 at 02:34

Colored, Ivory. . .

Robin, your vision of E and I in colour is delightful. Hmmn, the highlight of the stucco wall makes the perfect contrasting element in this composition

Jerome Belthrop     29-Apr-2002 at 02:33