Not really tired - FraM

There is something wrong with the composition. Perhaps I should have cropped to landscape format containing only the two faces. Or even square. I found that when cropped the story of the two girls pretending being tired on the sofa was lost.

Camera:	Contax G1
Lens:	Carl Zeiss Sonnar 90mm f/2.8
Film:	Fuji Astia
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Posted:	19-May-2003

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I think losing the bottom 1/4 of the image would help a lot.

Kevin Conville     19-May-2003 at 23:49

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Painterly

Nice art-a beautiful portrait. I agree with Kevin,that a slightly tighter crop would make a very nice image even better.

Don     20-May-2003 at 11:03

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